Wow, this page is awesome. I LOVE the colors and Mitch did an awesome job too...I actually really LIKE the painterly look...It really works well with the brush strokes that Mitch is using for the foliage and stuff.
Wow great work, madam! I really like the way you use those warm, natural colours, those lovely greens, yellows and browns, which seems to pop up in a lot of your work. It's very aesthetically pleasing. And as a aspiring writer myself, it's good to see that the writers got a little mention also!
Wow, very nice. Yeah, without the text, the color change can be confusing. But i just read it as a time cut anyways. Though looking at this page made me realize that Cap's costume is horrible for trying to sneak around. I mean really, the RED! WHITE! BLUE! doesn't really blend well with the foliage. No wonder he carries around a shield.
ok, so i'm going to be the bad guy and crit for a little bit (hey i'm a poet)
why are there two different types of background color schemes for one scene; one which might be early dawn and one that is smack dab in the middle of the day? I like the cold blues contrasting with the warm tones in the scope but then we jump into the next panel and have the same warm colors as the scope. wouldn't it visually look better to have us back into a 'cool' setting? I know we don't have the text, so that might explain a time lapse, but i'm a little confused.
and tell mitch to get that woman's head down in panel 4, she isn't modeling a tailored kahki shirt with howitzer, she's hiding. Get down before she gets cap killed (oh well to late for that, both for mitch and for cap)
maybe my real problem is that this isn't mitch's strongest page so I'm having issues with that, but i felt the need to ask about your scene coloring.
beyond that, it's done really well. maybe a little to much lens flare on the nazi's heads (to much painting and not enough coloring), but good job, really.
Thanks for the critique! I appreciate you taking the time. The script called for a time change of late night when they are running off into the woods to early/mid day with Cap looking through the scope. I was just trying to make sure the reader understood there was a time change. I agree it is confusing.
and your right about the painting- this page is over done.